Wednesday, August 10, 2005

my stand

This is a poem that I wrote a couple of minutes ago. It's kinda rough-draftish, so bear with it. Also, the look of my blog is being worked on, so what you see now will not be the finished result.


my stand~

stepping forward, not looking back.
counting my steps, not knowing why.
i'd rather flee than face attack,
and give in with a desperate sigh.

i languish at the mistakes i've made,
but reason that they push me forward.
"to what degree?" i tend to say,
while hiding like a coward.

i've long been content to sit here,
and wait for a helping hand.
to push aside my hidden fear,
so i can take another stand.

-brodie

posted by brodie @ 12:30 AM

3 Comments:

At 4:33 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

i like it, but what are you standing up to? :)
~Sarah

 
At 3:14 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Lukie! beautiful poem! :-)

*Amy*

 
At 3:15 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Lukie! beautiful poem! :-)

*Amy*

 

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